What I really want?
The burning to go away.
Clap from your cunt.
What a fucking drag.
I need antibiotics
and a phallic rag.
But she seemed so clean?
Although her gash was quite vast.
It colored me green.
No more one night stands
Or Q-tipping my spent pud
With shaky pale hands.
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burning love
Written March 22nd, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Burning Love by tazz wolf.
300 points, ended March 28, 2004, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sorry but this one was just too disgusting to even read i hoped i wouldn't have any of these besides maybe it was the man who infected the woman why does it have to be the other way around lol if this is what you were going for then you did a good job it just wasn't what i was looking for sorry dude
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very nice write sorry I can't comment more but i will at the end good luck and ty for entering TAZZ
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Makes my skin crawl... pardon me as I writhe a bit uncomfortably in my chair. Clever as... um, something really clever.
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hahaha..this is pretty original...and very creative...
Always,
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Now this sounds like the horus I know ha
Good luck in the contest its hilarious
Luv ya hun
Good luck roflma
Susan~~~
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wow that must suck to have the clap, hope you win
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they are all perfect haikus full of sub-standard material.
I'm onto something totally uneventful, lookout. lol -
The return of vulgarity? DevilEd has never left the pit of unrepentant sinners of vulgarity. He, in fact, is the most energetic of the diggers -- trying to find new depths to plumb.
What's Boy's Town got to do with this? Isn't that in Nebraska or somewhere? Or am I simply confused?
This is disgusting. You didn't even use a taco metaphor. Geez. Okay. It's uh, interesting. -
ouch.
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this was very very well done ... i love the tone/diction u used in it...simple but very thought provoking...almost sad..i did not find it really funny - not sure if that was your intention...i found it to be strikingly serious...would be great if performed...good job
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Looking forward to it..as always...
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hahaha burn baby burn! fucking great! Stay away from boys town is all I have to say...cheap taquila's just not worth it !
good luck in the contest...screw the politics of it all!
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I'm writing a new sestina. It's fucking awesome.
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fucking hilarious. q tipping my spent pud!! Hahahahaha. hunka hunka burnin love. You win. well, now that i read the description of the contest, you lose. No chance. But funny anyway.
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omg..i didn't even look at the contest..how fucking funny are you?
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YAY Return of Vulgarity !!! How I've missed you.
Oh, stay away away from those who eat cantalope, love.
Come to the Light....
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