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Lady of the Flower

Her sweet sent follows me like a cloud of tulips at their peak.
She dances around my mind so gracefully I have no choice but to watch her.
I strive to clone her beauty but I end up with nothing.
So I watch...
She is as beautiful as a rose in it's prime.
As graceful as a cherry blossom floating to the ground.
So perfect that wish I could be like her.
I remain silent as she dances...
Twirling around the garden stirring up the leaves around her.
Gliding past me as if I was made of stone.
I am weakened by her effortless dance,
But I know she will quickly fade.
She is the Lady of the Flower,
And I am next in line...

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  • Ami
    July 6

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    A lot of imaginary in such a short write amazing

    Thank you so much for entering my contest
    And good luck!

    -♥Amy♥