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life is not a cloud you can just float away on to fix things

                                                            Life
                                    life is not like a cloud, we can't always float,
                            Clouds are soft, but life is hard, harder then we think,
              When we think about it, when we think about really hard, life is so much better, then we sometimes think, We always have our moments where we want to scream, or kill our self's , WAIT STOP, before you do that think of all the the people that care about you, if you die now then you'll never know what comes next in life, so sometimes you do wish you could float away on a cloud, but you can't life isn't that way, so think you might as well just live life because you can't go back in time and fix things, but always remember life is not a cloud you can just float away on to fix things. LET PEOPLE HELP TO


P.S : i am Robin Candor's daughter and i am also flowergirl8,  LET PEOPLE HELP TO

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  • Welcome to Allpoetry

    This is an interesting write. I like how you have connected your background to your poem. Adorable write. Welcome to the site, if you have any questions please feel free to ask me.
    Laura,
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  • awww, this was really cute. and really witty in a way. looks like you've got life figured out