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Poetic Serenity

When I gaze into your eyes
I find myself quite mesmerized.
By their depth and changing colors in symphony
The light around the iris and pupil dancing …

Your eyes touch me deep within
As do your fingers as they are akin;
Giving rise to a deep quiver
as my whole body shivers.

Your kiss fills my soul complete
As I explore your hot psyche~
With my lips and tongue allures
pressing my body next to yours.

When we dance in the moonlight, twirling
I feel as if I belong in a sweet love story.
You and me, we feed and play off each other
gracefully swinging in harmony under cover;

Of the dim light of the dawn
You and I, we sing the song,
We have hummed for an eternity
It seems; eliciting a poetic serenity.

Is this true love or am I dreaming?
Or is this simple lucidity steaming?
I know how perfect our days and time can be;
Question is; do we want to seal this in reality?

Simply put ~ I Love You G!

Always,
Maylynn
aka:  MoonChild
aka:  DragonBlue

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  • Edie gold member
    July 6
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    Such a lovely, sexy and romantic write. Best of luck in the contest!

  • Well done, nice entry here, and I can see she enjoyed it! All the best within the contest, and keep up the great works. Peace!

    -Timothy

  • Such a passionat and dreamy piece of poetry portrayng a fondness for another's presence as inhabtions are set free to roam plasures of intimicy. A beautiful piece, my freind! who could resist such a powerful charming passionate individual as yourself

  • Wonderfully penned,
    Thanks again sweet one.

    Mistress Passions