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Real friends

You smack me
You punch me
You yell and bitch
You hurt my feeling's
but your trying to make me switch
scream untill you cannot
hit untill your bloody
insult me untill i cry-
when I COMPLAIN ABOUT wanting to  die
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I need a slap of reality,and i got it

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