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Desolation

I look into the looking glass
And see what the world has done
To this girl
With her pale lips
And joyless eyes
No longer laughing
Only the mask
An empty husk
Rattling in the wind

Author notes

gah it's soo gay sounding help please
Written March 22nd, 2004

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  • MAD-i-s-o-n
    June 24, 2004
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    HolyHell, I can't believe that no one has commented on this yet! I loved this write it's so wonderfully written. It's very beautiful. Such great wording, flow, and imagery. Amazing write I loved it so much.
    MADison**