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why don't you talk with me

you are so sweet
giving nectar to me
day in and day out
why did you stop the buzz now
I am forlorn flower
lie in waiting

all fragrance sterile
bereft of your voice
can your vocal chords sing again
warm my heart

do not leave me like a storm
stay with me like a clear sky
I ca see you always
and every where
in Sun light during day
twinkling stars lights you up
in twilight

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  • tarcus
    July 12

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    twinkle twinkle little star a note to you
    whoever you are there is a tiny error not worth a bann
    wonder if you can correct if you scan?


  • estbelle gold member
    July 5

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    twinkling stars lights you up
    in twilight

    I love this line
    and actually everything in this