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Heaven

I see you sleeping quitely on the floor,
Your long hair in a tangled halo around you.
your naked form spread out near the door.

I crawl towards you, sneaking quitley so as not to wake.
smoothing your hair, i softly kiss your neck.
So intoxicated by your smell my hands begin to shake.

Slowly you arise with a soft smile in your eyes.
you turn and pull me down to the floor,
Staring at me with eyes bluer than the skies.
you crawl on top and lock the door.
And into heaven we begin to travel once more.

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