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Forever

What becomes

Of dreams undone

Whom do hear

The whispered tears

Where to follow

If to hide

Heavy sorrow

Seeps inside

Saddened moments

Constant torment

Recalling days

When dreaming made

Lost forever

Alone to cry

Dreams of never

All to die...

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  • Silences Voice
    July 6
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    Wow

    Thats really amazing. I like it a lot. Beautifully written.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    July 5

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    DREAMS
    BRUISED MIND!
    need to heal,
    they don't die if they never lived

    if we want to know why our minds are bruised we have to go to beginning before the fall of man.
    is this a punishment? I guess if we don't grow and learn it could be seen as such.
    I guess if you are able to see that you aren't alone this feeling, this pain is present in every human being.
    will these bruised minds ever heal, it will take a time amd time and half of time
    but until them we need to live in the moment this is safest and the least painful place to be, and this is where joy is.
    everything that we experience with our senses is temporal, only our souls are eternal and they are always present.
    it is best to know this and believe it
    sincere and heartfelt my friend
    God bless you...
    a trillion 's