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Confusing World

Everyone hates.
Hate everyone.
No clue who to trust,
Trust makes me feel clueless.

Does anyone hear me?
Does anyone want to hear me?
Does anyone scream as loud as I do...
As loud as I can...
As loud as I can't...

My voice can't describe how I feel.
How I feel can't be screamed loud enough with my voice.
Words can't tell how I feel.
I try to speak my feelings.
Drawings can't show how I hate.
I try to manifest my feelings.

You are why I feel anger and pain...
My pain and anger are caused by you.
It's hard to let people in.
You forced yourself in.

You're an unfair, insensitive person.
You don't care about me.
I care about you.
I shouldn't care about you.
Should I?

My broken, faltered, open heart says yes.
My careful, degrading, conscious brain says no.
But I'm stupid.
And you're over-powering.

So I let you in.
Not thinking of what could happen...
What will happen...
And I die every time.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    July 6

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is a wonderful poem - I really like the way you have turned the pain and sadness of your situation into wonderful poetry - well done!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


    Polly
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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    July 5

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    You described your emotions and anger really well in this poem! I like it! It has a darkness to it...
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you're enjoying yourself on this site!!!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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