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The Wizard of Oz Part Two

Follow the yellow brick road
To the wizard’s tale untold
Of Dorothy and the wicked witch
And roles that have been switched

To a monkey who could fly
And little Dorothy died
The monkey ate her soul
That’s the wizard’s tale untold

Happy endings fled
And with little Dorothy dead
Toto became the pet
Of the monkey they had met

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  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    July 12
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    I LOVED this write!!! Great Job!!!!


  • InsanityisAmusing
    July 12
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    Dark and amusing, great job.


  • Miss Macabre
    July 12

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    Hehe. This is pretty clever, dark and a bit humorous. You write well. Thanks for entering and best of luck.


  • hellzkitkat420
    July 5
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    loved it!!! awesome read.

  • Zigon
    July 5
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    LOL

    I loved it! It makes sence to me cause im just that weird but yeah,Great job!


  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    July 5

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    That was much too short with alot of potential to have gone somewhere!!!
    Kansas perhaps?
    "Carry on my wayward son..."

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