This girl is a (beauty), but she's toxic
Like the (acid) on that paper
Not thinking before she (speaks)
(Thinking) only of herself
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*U N I T Y H O P E*
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Haha I like this
I love the metaphor in this... again it makes me think of my sister.
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huh... I don't know... acid is a hard thing to describe without ever having done it before. Acid kind of... thinks of everyone. And I know that makes no sense.
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lol it kept makin me think of doin acid
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that was the point
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1. please put your name in the AN, spaced out like so: q u i x o t i c .
2. your title prompt is: beauty upon acid.
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