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Desespoir

Hope
Untangible fate
Double-edged sword
Burning me
Cracking my heart
Glass shards
The mask hides
Unseen wounds
Bleeding
Crimson rivers of warmth
Flowing ceaseless
Only eyes betray the lie
Showing pain and sorrow
But no one looks inside
Only out
Their ignorance ruins
Child innocence
Causing the loss
Swelling inside
Creating a dark void
Forgetting pain
Wanting only
For release
For hope..

Author notes

if anyone's wondering the title is french for hopelessness
Written March 22nd, 2004

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