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Habits Strung out By Fear are Impossible To Break



Recycled hugs spiraled through tattered curls, and
indigo eyes developed cavities where her hope
should be, while spherical condolences racked
her ribs, searching for a way to tell her it would be okay.


Her ears burned with the false stars falling off tongues,
and she couldn't find enough ice in the kitchen to
put out the fire, every time she closed  her eyes she
saw tear gas and acetone signs littered with scarring words,
        defining the history of South Africa.

  Scotch tape wasn't enough to mend the holes in her bones,
even though she tried, and neither was the word 'hero' latched
to her parent's name, somehow when she looked around she
couldn't see that tomorrow might be different, or that in five
years, townships might not exist.

    Providence rung in the empty spaces of the liberated
      surrounding her, believing that change was possible,
            and Riana couldn't bear to whisper the sounds
                of gunshots breaking open marches, and the
                          way her momma's body spasmed as she died.

         
              All she knew about 'freedom' was the word ephemeral.

      She didn't need to know the definition


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W r I t I n g 0 f r e e do m

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  • Very, very good.
    Thanks for entering;
    Good luck.

  • dkilla001
    July 9

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    the last full stanza was the one that really hit me, great writing in there. and the line "freedom... ephemeral" just great stuff. good luck in the contest

  • This was awesome.

    thx for entering


  • dieu.
    July 5

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    here's a few words:
    cavity
    ice
    spherical
    spiral
    ephemeral
    providence
    recycled