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'Counterfeit handshakes'

Turning the cheek a slap ensued
Judging the one's who seem so subdued
Crouching around smiling in sham
Most  don't even know who I am

Conterfeit handshakes
They sneer those sly snakes
dodging the bullet I manage this time
riding the wave of unfortunate slime

They wait in secret to pounce the talk
Rolling the eye's as they stare and gawk
Justified by some rare few
Thoughts of disdain always ensue

Breaking away to where true friends await
give no more to the fisherman's bait
Luring me back... the spineless they come
I no longer entertain this body of scum!

Author notes

"He has no enemies, but is intensely disliked by his friends."

--Oscar Wilde

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  • nickkiwick
    September 24
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    Thanks for the Bronze! This was a fun contest


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    September 18

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    this is really well done and something i think more than one person has thought but could not write so eloquently. thank you for sharing this with me today and congratulations on the bronze. viyanna rosemarie

  • nickkiwick
    July 5
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    thanks I should have caught that...lol! I was trying to write this and at the same time I have a newborn who was demanding of my attention ...so I really appreciate when someone points out the errors I miss Thank you again for reading and your feedback I appreciate it a lot!


  • GotLilt
    July 5
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    I like this! Should that be spineless in the last stanza?