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Do you still want to be mine?

DO YOU STILL WANT TO BE MY ONE
MY BOYFRIEND IN WHICH I LOVE SO DEARLY
I CARE FOR YOU WHERE OTHERS WON'T
I'M THERE WHEN YOU NEED IT MOST
SO WHAT I'M ASKING YOU IS
PRETTY PLEASE WON'T YOU BE MY BOYFRIEND ONCE MORE
I LOVE YOU
DON'T YOU KNOW THAT
AND THIS LOVE I HAVE WILL NEVER FADE EVEN IF I MOVE AWAY
I'LL ALWAYS BE THERE WAITING FOR THE DAY IN WHICH YOU'LL TAKE ME BACK
BUT ALAS THAT DAY WILL NEVER COME
BECAUSE YOU LOVE ANOTHER AND YOU CAN'T CHOOSE BETWEEN
ME AND YOUR EX-GIRL
BUT REMEMBER THAT I'LL ALWAYS BE THERE
AND THAT I'LL ALWAYS LOVE YOU
SO PRETTY,PRETTY,PRETTY PLEASE WON'T YOU TAKE ME BACK
WON'T YOU LOVE AS YOU DID BEFORE
WON'T YOU END MY LONLINESS AND MY EVERLASTING MISERY
PLEASE OH PLEASE WON'T YOU BE MINE ONCE MORE
I ASK YOU AND YOU KNOW THAT I LOVE YOU
AND THAT I LOVE YOU EVEN IF YOUR WITH ANOTHER

Author notes

FOR DARK ANARCHIST THOSE WHO WANT TO SEE HIS POEMS CHECK OUT GO ON AND DO SO.THAT IS ALL.
Written March 22nd, 2004

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  • Poems
    May 11, 2004
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    beauty is in the eye of the beholder

    thanks for commenting on those i don't think anyone else has and i believe my love poems are better than my other poems too. anyway thanks again(i'm not much of a people person).

  • lonlyloser
    May 9, 2004
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    I like you poem b/c that has happend to me b4 and it just happend agian well.....it Cool..you really good!