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For SamanthaSam How God Shows Us Color

As the earth he created
with lush greens and browns,
it seemed to be enough
until woman was earth bound.
To greet her to life
flowers were created indeed,
to make her smile and feel loved
this all women see.

The blush of her cheeks
are shown on the petals for sure,
the blue hues  of her eyes we so adore.
The creams and the hues of gold
found within her hair,
makes Man feel so loved
for such beauty to share.

The daisies so small
for the child so fair,
the spider mums and their fragile tips
yet strong stems so shared.
The irises and the wild flowers
made from rainbow dust,
and the majestic rose
for the adults that's a must.

He sprayed each flower
with a scent of their own,
must have took a lifetime
for such love to be shown.
And the petals of the flowers
tells a story indeed,
for in each petal Gods love
holds them together you see.

So to know we were his first flower
created that day,
and from us he scattered all our colors
about along the way.
For a woman in her essence
carries such beauty love,
a truer flower was never made
from the man above.

Author notes

I hope you like my new poem I so love flowers of all kinds and nothing could ever take the place of flowers and their unique colors and pattern of perfection. As with a woman oh how she so blooms from faith through her years .

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  • awannabepoet
    August 2
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    Awe, it is so sweet this poem I am certain Sam loves this and well so do I.

    Excellent and great fun to read.


  • Puppydog gold member
    July 28
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    SO SWEET!!! A LOVELY LOOK OF WHAT A WOMAN IS!!!

    This is so sweet! A beautiful look as to how God made women. 's

  • mwzephyr
    July 19
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    good!

    nice story of creation, and the meaning of things...

  • I'm honored and impressed.

    Grandma,
    Thank you for this lovely poem you wrote for me. I am honored. The story behind this is very touching to me, to think that when God made women the colors were made and strown through out the world and all the beautiful things had color and hues. What an impressive write and imagery. I love you and this poem, Grandma.
    Hugs and love,
    Sam I Am


  • Tqop
    July 4
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    Oh how brilliant and beautiful.


  • Daxteriana
    July 4
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    this was pweety.

    Dax

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