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All In Good Time

I keep telling everyone
  All in good time.
Do they listen to any of my words?

Things aren't always as bad as they seem.
  You rush so much!
Do you appreciate what you have?

Are there other in worse need?
  Do you have a friend?
Do you help them if there is a need?

Soon your time will come.
  I will make something  special for you.
How well you like it, and will your remember me?

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  • I will make something special for you.
    How well you will like it does frighten me!

    very curious move in the words makes this poetry very thoughtful one..thanks...



  • Denerica
    July 4
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    Wisdom and honesty in your write. Well done. Blessings.

  • Good thoughts...

    Correct the punctuation and let the lines flow...