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Winter Hunt

Squaw warm
with tender thoughts
of brave,
though bitter winds
blow endlessly, 
clouds hover ominously. 

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  • piccola silver member
    July 26
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    Nice use of the 15 words. Thank you for entering.


  • Veronica Leigh
    July 4

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    I'm not usually a fan of this type of poetry. However, I love the imagery and the topic. I think you should re-write it as a longer poem