I can find you in a crowd of people
See you clearly in a sea of faces
Even though you may be miles away
I feel your presence beside me
There's something hanging in the air
So electric I can almost taste it
Through some bizarre coincidence
I don't understand how you're a part of it
As soon as I first met you
I felt this inescapable connection
Kinda like I've known you before
A face as familiar as my own
Just thinking of you now
These words flow from within me
I don't need to pause to think
At the back of my mind like instinct
There is no doubt you are the one
Can't think of you without myself
Otherwise I wouldn't be here
Stupidly pouring my heart out
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First thing I would suggest is to change the background as the text is not easy to read on this background. Perhaps make it your border background and have a plain colour for the middle? Other than that, the poem itself was well written and nice emotion used. Welcome to the site, if you have any questions please feel free to ask me.
Laura,
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Aww...
So I get this love story, it reminded a bit of lovers falling in love in some Hollywood movie, but that's okay. We all want to experience something like that, so kudos for taking me there. " I don't need...mind like instinct": those are good lines. Great title as well.So thanks for "stupidly pouring your heart out".
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