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Picture Shot

“Take a picture, snap snap.

One color. Yellow tells it all.

Graceful as a peacock when it comes to kindness.

Her smile brings sunshine of rays during the day break of summer.

Take a picture, flick flick

Re-merging the color of her cloths

Represents each of her personality.

Day by day she seems to find a pursuit of happiness.

One more time, click click

                          Now hold the umbrella and smile, snap snap”

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  • vampire blood
    July 5
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    this one t


  • WuzGood
    July 4
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    Not bad, i like it!


  • Kristen Kay
    July 4
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    I like it short and sweet.I like the forth line the best it is so amazing.


  • HumanoidTom
    July 4
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    Better


  • PinkeyPromise
    July 4

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    i like this but it could be longer if u add ed more it'd be amazeing! its great hun!

    ~Divine~

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