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My true Love

He's tall and athletic;
he's funny and smart;
He's caring and helpful;
He can be romantic.
I'm glad i found him, he's my true love.
I know he cares about me.
I never knew what it was like to be in love with a man
untill i found him.
Three years may not seem long, but i know that we'll
be together for as long as god wants us to be.
He's my true love.
I can be myself around him, he makes me laugh when i'm depressed.
When i'm feeling blue, he'll cheer me up again.
He's my true love!

Author notes

I wrote this to my boyfriend john. We have been dating now for three years. My longest relationship ever, lol.

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  • So, are you going to marry him? Because he sounds perfect and you are happy.

  • Perfect

    This is a really great poem. Your boyfriend should be happy and overly ecstatic.

  • I love this!!! You are a great write