As the blackened moon embraces my soul.
I drift off to another forgotten realm.
When life wasn’t so cold and time erased all sorrows.
A realm of remembered youth and sacred lives.
My soul battles the dark forces trying to escape.
But my soul and mind grow weary of the trials of this so called life.
So I drift to this realm hoping to reenergize my soul.
So that one day my soul might again be able to break the chains of grief.
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The final two lines give a strong sense of courage and strength
There is deep sadness and pain in this but you bring t out so well with the ending 
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
I really like the feel of this poem, it is a great atmosphere I can't help thinking you mean "lives" instead of "life's", "life is" doesn't make sense at the end of a line - but other than that this is a great write and I enjoyed it!
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