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You're a monster now

I'm hiding alone,
Desperate and scared,
Wondering when it will happen again.
You say you love me,
That its for my own good,
But you don't love me like you should.

I wish you would stop,
I'm begging you please,
If you werent pulling my hair,
I'd be down on my knees.
My blood starts to leak,
Into the floor boards it seeps,
And that is when your laughter peaks.

I can't see you any more,
You beat me once again,
Before you throw me down,
And I crumple in pain.
Here it gets worse,
Your feet come into play,
As if I'm a football,
On a bright sunny day.
But red is all I see,
Tainting whats left of your humanity.

You're a monster now,
Disgusting and vile,
And when my last breath comes,
I'm flung on the pile,
Of old and young,
Used and abused,
The deathly silent,
That fell victim to you.

The doctors report,
They don't understand,
How a five year old,
Could be in such a state.
Who could show a child quite so much hate?
Ribs are broken,
Lungs are punctured,
Skull is crushed,
Stomach bruised,
Fingers are gone,
And you watch,
As my family mourn,
With a smile on your face,
And a growing rate of hate,
For those who have a clean slate.

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  • RemovedName
    July 14

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    holy wow,i thought it was a just a torture poem but when you said 5 year old my heart broke, great write, heartfelt and sad with good emotion.
    Thank you and good luck
    -Cody

  • oh. my. God.

    This is. Beyond words.

    I love it.

    This came out of nowhere and just. Wow.


    This is art at its finest point.

    I loved

    " As if I'm a football,
    On a bright sunny day."


    This deserves more then 3 clappy claps! id give u a hundred if i could!

  • o, wow. great job

  • Oh wow, when you said it was a five year old being abused it really hit me. This is shocking piece, chilling. And like the other person who commented, I agree it is heartbreaking. Thank you for entering this and good luck.

  • hojadaro
    July 4
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    Totally heartbreaking ... a fantastic poem.

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