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Secret Admirer

I know you but you don't know me
You can give me the world and I will give you my everything
Seeing how tight you keep your swagger
My love for you keeps running faster
You will not believe the things we have in common
Whatever you want, I'm all in
I'll cater to you and give you what you admire
It is me, your secret admirer

Your eyes are true, your lips so sweet
That's the place we're going to meet
My speciality is just simply pleasing you
When we make love, it feels oh so good to me
Passionately in love is just so sweet
There's something about you that I really admire
Here you are, my secret admirer

Once we're in the room, you kiss me passionately
Your lips hitting mines, I wrap around you seductively
I rip off your shirt and get ready for what we're about to do
Whispering the words softly, "I Love You"
Wanting you more and more
We've been waiting for this moment some time before
An hour and a half later, we both feel inspired
All this time, you just figured out, I was your secret admirer

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  • cloe009
    July 5, 2009
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    girl

    u so know this one of my favs by leave it the way it is always