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Survived Through Years Of Tears

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He could have survived
if he would have opened his eyes
and listened to the words
that were so beautifully sung.

"You're not alone
there is more to this I know
You can make it out
You will live to tell"

My son died all alone
escaping life by being stoned.
Hurting deep inside
trying to numb the pain.

This was my biggest fear
as a mother who loved him deeply.
Knowing the potential he had
in sharing his story with others.

Now my eyes are opened
to these words of wisdom.
These words for me to hear
through all my fears and many tears.

"You're not alone
there is more to this I know
You can make it out
You will live to tell"

Through my life's tragedies,
severe child abuse,
then the death of my son.
I've felt so alone, devastated to the bone.

Now I know my son will live on
as I tell of his story as well as my own.
To bring hope to a hurting world
sending them this powerful message.

"You're not alone
there is more to this I know
You can make it out
You will live to tell"

Somehow I've survived to tell
in helping others whom are frail.
That you are not alone in your fears,
for I have survived through years of tears.

 

"You're not alone
there is more to this I know
You can make it out
You will live to tell"



Written by: Kelle Marie Stavron
July 4, 2009

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Poem written from the song artist's: It is the song Saosin-You're Not Alone

Here is the video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uhD8WnBQQIw&feature=fvst

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  • CountryCousin
    September 27

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    These words.

    Ten years ago these same words, you are not alone, were said to me. I was at stage four of cancer and when the pastor repeated them to me, I kept them in my foremost mind. Now ten years later I come back to them and know they are true. I hope that you know that your are indeed not alone and that love prevails in the end.


  • Midnite wolf gold member
    July 23
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    omg, this brought tears to my eyes, it is an amzing, powerful write, I can really relate to the words you have written, this is just what I needed to read right now, cos this could so easily have been me, i hope writing helps you to cope and begin to heal with the death of your son. a brilliant piece

  • wow, i love this, its so powerful, a brilliant message that i'm sure will give hope to any who read, I can relate well to your words, having also being an addict and losing friends to drugs, recently I almost lost someone who's like a sister to me. will send her the link to this, as I know she will also enjoy your words of hope. I'm sorry for your pain,

  • Hood-Wink!

    Your message is strong and incredible; to be able to pass on the story and experience you can help many in the world with what could be happening to them and help them see they aren't alone


    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • debilynn gold member
    July 9

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    HOOD~WINKED!!!


    this is well written.  great imagery.   intense emotion.  very lyrical.  th ank you for sharing your amazing talent.   keep writing poet!   God bless you always 

    you have been hood-winked by a poetic  bandit.

  • Hood-Wink!

    I am so sorry for your loss...

  • this is wonderful and i realy encourage you to tell your sotry....i have trie to kill myself many times and i have never heard from a mother who has had their son/daughter committed suicide and it is a big eye opener.....i cried because this poem hit me so deep.....nice job working in the lyrics....i think this is a wonderful poem

  • Amazing!!!!!

    Kelle, This is amazing!!! I do not know the song listed but this could easily put to music!!!! It is so lyrical and flows quite well. You should be proud of this song...It is a reaching out from you to others that they may know they are not alone with anything in this world and urges them to press on and live through the pain to tell of their survival!!!! Brilliant words from a brilliant poetess!!! Thanks for sharing!!!! Love you my friend!!!~~~~Toni~~~~


  • Rovingone gold member
    July 4

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    Such a heart tearing emotional appeal. This story is one that makes you want to reach out to the teller and hold them.

  • Amazing! Just the emotion I was looking for!


  • Frogzter gold member
    July 4

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    This is deep, intense and heartfelt. As always you have touched my heart in a profound way!

    Much love,

    Frogz~


  • penman gold member
    July 4

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    Powerful

    You shared so much deep and intense feelings with this write. Sharing as only a mother can share. I hope writing it helped in some way.

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