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My favorite poem

Fireworks go boom!
In the air "there they go!"
Sparklers and firecrackers
"Be careful!" mom yelled
Dad yelled "Booya"
Mom yells "PATRICK!!"
"Coming" i say
Mom said im grounded
No more fireworks
No more firecrackers
And no more sparklers
Now fourth of July is over =(
Mom puts me to bed
She says goodnight
Ill see you tommorow
on July 4!
SO IM NOT GROUNDED?
I yell, she says you still are 

But not tommorow
Today is only july 3rd
Tommorow is july 4th

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