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Pelted Poems

Missing image

time and I conspire,
to skip stones of verse
across placid chronicles.
within ripples of rhyme
I watch

your memory drown~

hope sinks
with these diving bells.

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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 12

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    this has a nostalgic feeling, but the imagery is vibrant...precise use of words, very well done...PK


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    July 7

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    Brilliant!!

    I love this zen-like imagery, and your muse's finely-tuned, magical artistry:
    "to skip stones of verse
    across placid chronicles.
    within ripples of rhyme"
    Write on, shine on, Poet!!
    Peace,
    Cyn


  • Nicolette gold member
    July 4

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    lovely succinct piece of writing this is, but it holds such emotion and visuals within it. wonderful metaphor... this one murmurs like water.

    ~ Nicolette