You guide me through all my fears and worries and all traumas
in my life,
for you guide me through my saddest times,
through all my doubts and strife's.
But when i am feeling low, and so it feels like i do not
belong so i have nowhere to go,
i feel your wings around me and as they do unfold,
and once again a feeling that i belong,
a secret shared never to be told.
The warmth you place around my heart brings me comfort
everyday, and then for all my ups and downs yet again on you i can rely
as i know that you are the one person that for me shall always be
there,
for your love is unconditional, and your nature is just to
care.
for you have helped me to see things clearly, yes you
became my sight,
and so in certain situations with answers i battle and fight,
and so when everything goes dark,
you guide me through and bring me back into the light.
For you are my guardian angels and are with me everyday,
and although some people do not believe, and assume my
mind has gone astray,
they do not make me feel the things you make me feel,
for they are not open minded people as for me it is all
real,
for everyday you protect me, and so around my heart
you place a seal.
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Welcome to Allpoetry
I like the imagery you have used, the only thing I would suggest changing is the lower case 'i's capitalising these makes the poem presentation seem a lot better I think. Other than that, nice write, welcome to the site and if you have any questions let me know.
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
This is a gorgeous poem
I really like the expression of the feeling of being safe and warm and looked after beautifully done!
Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!
Polly
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lisa diallo
thank you for your lovely comment on "you guide me through", if you liked that i think maybe you will like the other 2 i just added, would love to hear your thoughts wether positive or negative on these
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