Kiss me Goodnight
Leave you name on the side
Fill in the missing blanks
Make sure that I'm alive
Simple words
Long conversations
The scratch on a name
Another tried patience
The scar on your cheek
The bruise on my arm
Everything shows your signature
It makes me feel calm
A contest entry
- Prompt by AliceinPoetryLand.
900 points, ended July 5, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
well?
Comments
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very deep , great job
well done
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Lots of things ran through my mind as i read this,
"Kiss me goodnight, Leave your name on the side", strikes me as a typical one night stand, "Fill in the missing blanks, make sure that I'm alive" makes me wonder, if you were under the influence of drugs and alcohol. ..
Then there seems to be a twist.. although i don't particularly understand where it's coming from, i'm over analysing you're words, and comparing it to things going on in life right now.
I enjoyed this piece of work
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Just beautiful I love the imagery in this piece. It made me sigh. Thank you for your entry
Gaylene
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