A sad ending,
Im done with pretending.
I can't live without you,
Some how you know its ture.
Please tell me you still need me,
I cannot let my soul be free.
Not until you speak to me.
You say you dont feel me anymore,
MY heart is still sore.
Tell me goodbye,
So my tears can finally dry.
I'm old news now,
Ill get over you...somehow
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by alex brooks
A contest entry
- Sometimes its not because of you by tarcus.
500 points, ended July 23, 19 entries
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ture.
first one to comment left out the spelling mistake
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Good small mistakes
Sorry, I have an issue with grammar sometimes. In your first ending "I'm done" In your forth stanza "you don't" and "My heart" In your sixth stanza "I'll get" Anyways to the actual poem I hope I get your meaning right.Your boyfriend/girlfreind left you and your trying to get over him or her? I'm kinda bad at interpreting poetry sometimes. I think I would feel this way if my lover left me.Good poem.
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