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White Men Can't Dance...;)

Gamble la la, Ramble ta da...
White men can't dance.
Grumble malais, stumble this way
White men can't FREAK...

Rumble in the jungle,
Understand the beat...
But then we never really cared
For syncopated heat, did We?

Bung, bungalow,...Ho!
Where d'you find that beat?
Hey!  Life's a Ho!  Buy God,
Can't seem to stop my feet....

Intellectual, brow beat
Me up!  Just don't let it skip.
Mocking my own body, it's a
Hottie dancing with her

Eyes closed... like nobody's
Watching... ... ; ...but it's not
True.  My body, she was
Dancing with You!

Meter doesn't scan, and the rhyming stinks...what else do you think?

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