large eyes peer from the dark shadows
waiting to grab and pounce on his prey
tries to keep breathing shallow and quiet
been too long since satisfaction of murder
escape from the institution just an hour ago
his tormented mind demanded a fresh kill
the thrill of the chase and tying them up
smelling their fear was almost orgasmic
as he stared in their pleading dying eyes
shaking with knowledge of his past notches
he had killed two guards to break loose
his driven thirst for a cheap thrill not satiated
the victim comes along and he grabs a woman
knocking her out behind the hidden wall
anticipating her bodies death throe spasms
as he tied her up the victim woke up screaming
he loved this part of stomping on them until
blood would ooze from their mouth and nose
his high pitched wail like an animal would be
heard by any unfortunate person within a mile
he would smile and hide in his safety again
hoping more would come along for his play
his hardened heart would ache for pleasure
his demented soul would look for another toy
to play cat and mouse and a night of pure joy
A contest entry
- SCARE MY PANTS OFF! by Jade.Butterfly.
1800 points, ended July 10, 32 entries
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What did you think
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OMG! This was scary and dark and Macabre Horror. I loved it. This contest is hard to judege. You go to the top too. Thank you for entering and i wish you luck. Keep writing like this. You do an awesome job of horror. Creepy stuff.
Cat
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wow wow ...I want my mummy...this is so scary ....an excellent write with so much tormented emotion and darkness ...one out of left field for you ..brilliant Dear Lil Sis
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Very gory and chilling. Sounds like a horror movie.
Thanks for entering this creepy write and best of luck.
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Thrilling
WOW awesome poem do not think I want to play that game
Good luck in the contest.
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Yipe
This is indeed scary, Paint a bloody picture, death hides in this night. Love this it's disturbing.Please read my newest Nine Thousand Miles, Tell me what you think?....chael tip of the hat to you
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WOW!!
Dark and creepy this was..
I wont be walking in the dark i know thats for sure.
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This was excellent,love. You captured that need to kill to quiet the voices i his head sort of mood here. you made it like he was feeding some sort of loony need and that was excellent. best of luck to you in the contest.
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i wont be walking to the shop in the dark now thats for sure it was a scarry piece indeed thanks for entering and good luck
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