1. unsure how to land on his feet
his flapping gave him some slight control
2. as his insides were breakdancing with attitude,
crying really wasn't the best thing to do
A contest entry
- (COLLABORATION) FLY IF YOU CAN by condor.
1600 points, ended July 18, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like the lines you used to describe this little fellow, although the rhythm didn't quite sit with my two versus i gave. You can change things before the contest closes if oyu wish. I thank you for entering and the very best in the contest.
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I'll take a short spell of time and see if I can't reign it in a bit more-doctor on it, you know...will keep you posted
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I don't know...
I'm not sure....I don't know...yet
must see finished product
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Me too....hahaha...holding my breath hahaha symbolically
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