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Abandoned

Missing image
Once adored, now a victim of bored.

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ragdoll

A contest entry

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  • Rhiannan
    July 5

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    Wow just wow, simple yet it makes a stunning impact i adore this. A poem doesn't have to be fourty lines long to be stunning.

  • quite grasping indeed... x


  • Peteskid gold member
    July 4

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    ha! every child has some of these i think, the dearest possession that eventually fades...very good!...PK

  • From riches to rags...great take on the prompt, wishing you well in the contest