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love on the edge

changing from one thought to another
going back and forth
i'm in between two strong personalities
and i'm gettin' to close to the edge.

love for one,
old love for another.
they both expect me to choose!
they both expect me to do something wrong
and i'm spinning round!
i can't do anything without permission
or guilt from at least one.

i didn't love was meant to feel like this..

he's making me jump,
my nerves are on split ends!
i'm gonna fall apart tonight (because of this)
why can't i just be left alone?

I'M SICK [screamed]
(i'm sick) i'm sick of being crushed beneath the weight
of what falls on me.

why can't i just be left alone?

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a song for our band.
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