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For my daughter

I love you baby girl, forever and always,
your my whole world , forever and always,
Each smile and giggle imprint in my memory, forever and always,
your my happiness that each moment brings, forever and always,
my first born my baby girl, forever and always,
your momma loves you and always will, forever and always.

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  • morgana raven Greeters member
    July 4
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    I think this is such a nice tribute. Very well written and nice emotions used. Perhaps edit the background to help with feel and tone of the poem? Other than that, great write. Welcome to the site, if you have any questions please ask me.
    Laura,
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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    July 4

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    welcome to all poetry

    This is such a loving poem for a little one. There is nothing like the joy and purpose your children bring to your life.

    ♥
    Shawna
    Site Greeter