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pollution?

it's like you can taste the misery in the air
with solemn laughs
and bad debation.
i've got more more dedication
to live this through and withstand it.

theres a riot circus in my heart
and its pumping through my veins.

i can feel it in my veins
it's tripping me over!
PUMP IT, PUMP IT, PUMP IT!
through my dark red blood
so that you can almost see the discoloration.
but damn, you can feel it so eager to escape
and pollute others around you.

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a song for our band.
unfinished, any constructive criticism is thanked.

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