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getting dizzy

it's like i'm living in his injustice with all the pain screaming and surrounding me!
it messes with my head and plays with my mind and
with your gentle touch and forceful thrust,
i'm going around in circles!

i don't know where i'm heading and i'm sick of feeling dizzy
i'm gonna fall...
can you feel me slipping?
and the thoughts in my head are questioning:
are you gonna catch me?

don't sweat it baby, not anymore 'cuz i'm twisting
and struggling beneath your grip.
i'm gonna break free, i'm going to be free!
i'm not gonna bother to try and persuade you to try
and let me go, cuz'

i don't know where i'm heading and i'm sick of feeling dizzy
i'm gonna fall...
can you feel me slipping?
and the thoughts in my head are questioning:
are you gonna catch me?

it's funny, i don't feel so dizzy now, it's leaving me now.
i'm leaving you now.

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a song for our band.

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