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Come one, come all!
Step right up, cause this is the main attraction!
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Ladies and gentlemen,
feast your eyes on the headliner,
the grand finale,
and the reason you crawl out of bed every day!
One look will make you stare,
a second will give you butterflies,
and if you stare too long, you'll start to tremble!
But don't be afraid folks,
she is anything but terrifying.
One smile will melt your inhibitions,
and send them into oblivion!
Only desire will come out to play.

Fear not, my friends,
for she is no succubus,
or harpy, or man-eater.
Stand in reverence, for she is something more divine.
Not even in your dreams could you create
a more perfect creature.
Now, behold,
for I give you,
the angel!

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  • Macsword
    July 31

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    Something completely different...

    I like different and I do like this write. I think you missed "I" in the second to last line. But to think of an "angel" in a sideshow. That is very different indeed. Thank you for this entry.
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