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neverland

All eyes
one...
who
would ever
see?

Dry eyes
done...
this
could never
be.

Michael.

A contest entry

Why does it take tragedy for us to see their pain?

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  • piccola silver member
    July 25
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    Is the name to be considered as part of the write? It is the 15th word ...


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 4

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    o ok tribute poetry i saw you and got a tingle all over lol nice though good luck sweetheart in the contest