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I have the cure.

you told me,

"if you were bottled, you could
cure a disease."


I wish I could say "I'm too weak to
be your cure," but the truth is,
my weaknesses are a politician's
poker face; my faults read like
ransom notes, stuttered and
unsure of their importance.




you tell me of a treatment
for leukemia and senility -- but
you are the cure for
a disease I've never had.

Author notes

prompt: # 8. I have the Cure

song quoted: 'Guernica' - Brand New.
& for the record, there are a few words referenced from the song "Speakers Blown" by Hit The Lights -- "read like ransom notes" -- so I wanted to make sure I cited them.

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  • ZachP gold member
    July 6

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    This is just .... wow

    I absolutely love the concept/prompt, and the closing phrase/thought is just . . . .love it.

    Well done

  • I adore this. You are such an amazing poet, Jess.