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Trace

Past denial
Near accept
The suicidal
Feelings kept

Never knowing
Or understood
Depression flowing
No one could

Even dormant
Dark pervades
Killing moments
Depression bades

 

c2009 vduna

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  • Silences Voice
    July 6

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    Intense

    I love it! Is so strong and emotional. Its amazing, like that of all your work. I love reading your poetry. You're able to pack so much into so little words, I'm at aw every time I read one of your poems.


  • ScarsFade
    July 4

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    Such a hypnotic flow you have. i thought this was very different it had such a rhythmic feel of cold depresssion....wow i loved it you ahve such a simple but direct point and it was very well stated...keep writing it is WONDERFUL....much <3...scars.