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Unborn (Haiku Form 5/7/5)

Tears hidden within,
Angel of death consumes babe;
Reflections of self.

Miracle, mishap?
Affliction on mind and soul;
Fatherhood, briefly.






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Not really sure if this is what you are expecting 20 words Prompt: Its not the women who always suffer, the men feel the pain too.

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  • jasminerose
    July 23

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    A moving piece Ken, very heart wrenching! To express these profound emotions in a Haiku form is just brilliant.
    Linda

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    July 4
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    Very soul-wrenching. You conveyed the sorrow and pain very well.

    Lady D

    • InBetweenThoughts
      July 4
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      Thank you Lady D Glad you enjoyed this..it was actually for a contest, but when I posted it the contest had closed! Have a lovely day,IBT