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Me And you

Me And you

I say I love you,
But words are cheap.
You say you love me.
A promise you keep.

I say I need you,
But I'm a liar.
You say you need me.
I'm your desire.

I say I feel you,
But I'm wearing a glove.
You say you feel me.
This must be love.

I say you're right,
But I must be wrong.
You say I'm right.
We knew all along.

I say nothing, and you say something.

   By: Tyler A. Oberding

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  • whitecoffee
    July 7

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    I also like this, it's very honest and the form fits well, makes it seem more detatched. I cannot think of anything to change in it. welcome.


  • Polaja Greeters member
    July 4

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is a great poem of one-sided love - I really like the way that you have expressed this - well done!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


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  • emo-ria
    July 4
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    wowz!!!!!!!this touched me!!!!!!!kinda made me rem me bf and me.nice poem!!!!!