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The Light of Day

The Light of the Day
        The smile of the young and elderly,
      The joy of children,
        The passion and intuition of a young athlete,
    And the love some gives you.
                This is what makes days so bright.

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  • xxBlack Dawnxx
    July 10
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    you write like the world glows your poetry is sweet i loved this


  • Quietgirl17
    July 4

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    Yes... those are the things that make days bright. I love this write because it shows true emotion and it is so good to read. Great job and keep on writing!!!