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Flimsy wishes
Air-borne kisses
Brushes with true love.

Hearts unbroken
Words soft spoken
Secrets told to last.

Dire glances
Sultry dances
Nights spent under stars.

Romantic banter
Souls do chant the
Freedom of my Heart.

Author notes

You dnt have to like it. I wrote it in one of those moods. I had this weird tune in my head and this just came out...

From "unco" with love :)

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 12

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    I like it...Your word play and rhyme is great...and it has a lyrical beat to it...Keep penning dear friend..Good to come back and find you here!


    • unco
      October 17
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      thanks so much...it's nice to hear from you

  • Yes..love brings the universal freedom around and get the peace of the soul as well..you are so true while expressing this truth here..well done...