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Drag Me To Hell

Within the halls of hell itself
There dwells a presence dark
Spells and karma on my shelf
Life as we know it stark

The demon hides behind each corner
Awaiting me to pass
Destined to live as the mourner
He stole my soul alas

Now vacant in this shell am I
My eyes are painted black
Soon enough the end draws nigh
And soon He will attack

The eerie stench of death is strong
And no one comes to see
The way He died, it was so wrong
And now He's taking me

Author notes

Not like the movie but with my content this is what I thought of.

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  • awitersheart
    July 7
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    Scary

    Chilling poem the stench of death I love it awesome poem
    Good luck in the contest.


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    July 4
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    o0o00oo Cold chills!
    Yikes!!


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    July 4

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    wow this is such a sweet cruel darkish write from you. I really love the fele to this poem and really enjoyed how you worded this poem as well =] anyways just a really beautiful depe dark beautiful depth of a poem and enjoyed the read. keep up the nice work as always & good luck in the contest. Tiger =]


  • glenn shannon silver member
    July 4

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    when one mentions the stench of death it so chills me and the end draws nigh mmm scary indeed thank you for entering im shivering .. good luck