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Fifteen words.

One day we will be but sun
bleached bones buried beneath
plastic dollar store novelties.

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  • piccola silver member
    July 25

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    nice job. A lot said in just 15 words. I like the image that this places in the readers mind. At least in this readers mind Thank you for entering.


  • WisdomWarrior
    July 8

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    "bleached bones buried beneath
    plastic dollar store novelties. "

    Wow now that puts things in perspective for real! Nice write scribe.

    One Love,

    John


  • Janetheplain
    July 5

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    I love this! The strength and weariness in this is so conflicting but mesmerizing and interesting. Really awesome, Jane