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Foxed

Lick,lick,
cunning and slick,
why do I hang around?
'cause I know this crafty lady
prefers her foxes red to brown.

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here is the link to the three foxes picture.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2451857

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Comments

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  • Great take on the prompt. A sassy little write which made me smile. It also reads very well with a nice a tempo...Alby

  • Ha! Clever stuff, Sweet Pea!

    It rolls off your tongue in perfect sync with the pic prompt. Well done.

    Best of luck in this contest!

  • this is very clever


  • ronnica
    July 3
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    You were quick, I hav'nt even posted yet.
    Thank you.


  • Draig aine gold member
    July 3
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    oh I like

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